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I love you for all the boys I never knew
I love you for all the times I spent with you
For the smell of the sea and warm bread
For the flowers that you put near my bed
For the pure animal that lies within a dove
I love you for all the boys I do not love

Without you I can only see the wide world
The mirror cannot produce the image that was destroyed
The moment between what was and is today
And by forgetting the road I was well on my way
But the hole in the wall did not reveal a lot
So I had to learn about life by the pieces I got

I love you for your wisdom that is not mine
I love you eventhough people consider this a crime
I love you though I know it is all  illusion
But my heart is beating in restless confusion
You think you are doubt, but you are reason
You are the sun that will be present every season <>
~*~ Fantasy ~*~
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lucyjewel Jan 22, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Awwwwwwwwwwwww cute....
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gillian-raine Jan 7, 2013  Hobbyist Photographer
I love this so much. It speaks about where I am right now.
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ZeBunnyzz Nov 25, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I don't know how to respond to this... It's so beautiful! keep writing like this! LOVE YOUR WRITING I CAN READ IT ANYDAY! :D
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mangasockattack Nov 21, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
This is a really lovely poem. In my opinion, it is about a girl who is a lesbian who is in love with another girl. The lines "I love you eventhough people consider this a crime" and "I love you though I know it is all illusion" and "But my heart is beating in restless confusion" were my favorites. They were very thought provoking and sad and oddly hopeful at the same time. Great work!
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:iconabsinth-c-lover:
Thank you so very much for your compliment Manga .. Blush ~ This is a poem for everyman. You may judge or conclude whatever you like :) It's about ' Love ' and love is universal ~*:heart:*~
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mangasockattack Nov 21, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Agreed :D
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tbonelafs Nov 21, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I enjoyed reading this. Really liked the line "The mirror cannot produce the image that was destroyed" because it was thought provoking. Nice work!
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:iconabsinth-c-lover:
Thank you very much Tbonelafs ~ I'm honored and very happy you like it.
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tbonelafs Nov 22, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
No problem; and keep writing!
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